Your work is very unoriginal and mediocre. C'mon, a swirly line? Get some inspiration and some creativity. That swirly line is also too much like Arctic Monkeys' logo. You can create much better. You have a brain.
While I fully embrace constructive critique, I have a hard time accepting “unoriginal and mediocre” as a constructive. If you have some kind of deeper insight other than just “get some inspiration and some creativity,” I’d be willing to take it to heart. Additionally, speaking to a specific audience and communicating effectively is more important to the project your speaking of than coming up with something that’s never been done before (not to mention the fact that actually, it’s not that close to their logo?)
In short, haters gonna hate.
jucarl said: Is it gonna be colored / are you printing it out?
it’ll be printed, black and white and (possibly) on colored paper.